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tinker_bell Admin
Number of posts : 132 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Your lyrics Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:38 pm | |
| i have a song that i wrote and in just a sec i will go and find it and you can tell me if it sounds ttly bad. | |
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tinker_bell Admin
Number of posts : 132 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:45 pm | |
| ok
its called it's gonna be okay
have you ever felt, no one loves you when you need them there's no one to turn to well i am here to say, that everything's gonna be okay
close your eyes, sit back enjoy the ride. you don't have to hide what's inside. it doesn't matter what they think today, because it's all gonna be okay Hey! Hey! it's all gonna be okay
when you're sitting there all by yourself put you're problems up on the shelf dance along and sing out loud, dont be shy stand tall and proud
having trouble? now don't you worry there's no need to get in a flurry! because i am here to say, that everythings gonna be okay.
close your eyes, sit back enjoy the ride. you don't have to hide what's inside. it doesn't matter what they think today, because it's all gonna be okay Hey! Hey! it's all gonna be okay
close your eyes, sit back enjoy the ride. you don't have to hide what's inside. it doesn't matter what they think today, because it's all gonna be okay Hey! Hey! it's all gonna be okay Hey! Hey! it's all gonna be okay! | |
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im_weird_like_that Admin
Number of posts : 117 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-09
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:56 pm | |
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tinker_bell Admin
Number of posts : 132 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Tue Sep 18, 2007 5:17 pm | |
| thanks i am not really sure if i like it or not but u said that u like reviewed songs and lyrics 4 a lot of bands at ur skool so i think i can trust u 2 tell me the truth. and if i evr post a song on here that u dont like then plz tell me. i wont get mad i promise. | |
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im_weird_like_that Admin
Number of posts : 117 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-09
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Wed Sep 19, 2007 5:52 pm | |
| no problem honisty is my best polisy even is i cant spell | |
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im_weird_like_that Admin
Number of posts : 117 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-09
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Wed Sep 19, 2007 5:59 pm | |
| heres mine! i wrote it for a band of guys so here
Don't Go Ever dream I have seems so real I wish the dream would finish and let me know the end I woke up. Dyes confused thinking of a way to bring me back to you.
Don't go, when everything feels so right. So just close your eyes.
Time has passed… Thinking of, all the beautiful things we have seen. I close my eyes! And dream of you. To bring me back to you. | |
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im_weird_like_that Admin
Number of posts : 117 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-09
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Wed Sep 19, 2007 6:02 pm | |
| this is one i wrote for a guy too
Cry
Come home searching for something more. The pain inside is slowly killing her. She looks for love, all she feels in shame. She fights for what's not reality.
Don't Cry, Don't you ever cry. Don't Cry, Don't you ever cry.
Questioning everything she knows, She never feels love from her home. Wanting more She screams for love! (Her heart is torn, her life unfolds)
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tinker_bell Admin
Number of posts : 132 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-08
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Tue Sep 25, 2007 6:49 pm | |
| that was awesome! u r really good! that is soooo coolies, i wish i could rite better songs but i cant an 1 day, my dream is 2 rite songs like FOB sings. like the gibberish, doesnt make since unless u look @ it in a funny way type lyrics. i have no idea wat im tlkin bout but just go wit it | |
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im_weird_like_that Admin
Number of posts : 117 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-09
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Wed Sep 26, 2007 5:31 pm | |
| thanks i can write forever about things that are important to me but writing an essay about why you should be in beta or somthin noway i just cant i totaly block out | |
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im_weird_like_that Admin
Number of posts : 117 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-07-09
| Subject: Re: Your lyrics Wed Sep 26, 2007 7:49 pm | |
| i wrote this for soomeone they had a fight one of there friends they got writers block i could relat & i thought it was sad so i helped out
its called undone (they picked not me)
I can see it your eyes you're hurting But pain is part of learning who you are All these truths can sometimes be deceiving When your whole world comes crashing to the ground
Tell me everything you need now anything at all and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall
yeah, When you come undone When you come undone
You know I can't be like everybody Cause I can't tell you what you want to hear I don't know if I can make it better All I know is I will be around
Tell me everything you need now anything at all and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall
yeah, When you come undone When you come undone
When all your plans are made out lying on the floor and all your dreams are turning into nothing more When all your hope has left you know you're not alone Just hold on Hold on
Tell me everything you need now anything at all and I will be the one who's waiting anytime you fall
yeah, When you come undone When you come undone
we worked together on this one please be honist mot of my other friends didnt like it so its ok | |
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